[18.07.09] Gates to the future!

Muaaz

Wild Hunt
Jan 26, 2007
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Dutchy of Touissant
I really liked the art , but it seems a little bit overdone . And about the dialogues , you should make it more distinguished next time . Nice try though .
 

talalthegreat

You'll never walk alone
Feb 21, 2009
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That was lame Shyber for a guy like you..coz it had nothing to do with what I was saying. I was requesting him to make em more prominent, not 'edge-free'. But nice try :p (head back to my article...you need to read it properly)
Agree with you alot there. I couldnt distinguish it myself.
 

Black Basara

Power Is Everything!
Jul 8, 2008
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My Own Little World.
Nice..but the characters needs more polish, first i thought its just a rough concept. You should have worked on Photoshop and the dialouges seems out of place too much slang doesn't give lols, i'm not impressed with comic balloons. Anyway nice effort :)
 

abid078611

help others
Jul 12, 2009
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shyber koi achey cheez banao

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farigh comics hein
 

r3aper

W'Sup, G?
Jul 23, 2007
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Karachi
Thanks for the appreciation guys! Means alot to us!

And a special shoutout to Amar for taking it to the next level, with comics coming out every week inshallah hopefully we'll improve fast!
 

Raptorian

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Feb 15, 2007
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Dubai
I'm not going to discourage here. I can say that this is a very very good first effort. Cookie's artwork is perfect. The story was well, lame but you guys are catching the drift. Keep going and give us a comic once a week atleast.
 

Lars

nofuturenopast
Oct 6, 2008
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lol !! targeting X360 owners..........Great work ! I likeyyy
 

Amar aka Cookie

Comic Artist / Anime Mod
Mar 19, 2009
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Thank You!

Thanks guys for all your support and admiration! ...

I will continue to draw comics for PG despite all the flame I've been getting.

My art may need major work, but I will not waver from drawing the comics the way I want to.

I hope I don't trample on anyone's feelings. Just to make clear that I am determined to do things my way ... I have a little present for you all.

Don't take it personally =3



Love, Amar Ali
(Amar aka Cookie)
 
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