3D wallpaper design

[freakazoid]

This is a new wallpaper i whooped up in Blender 3d and Adobe Aftereffects today, Don't even know if i'm supposed to post on a seperate thread anyway, i'd like to see if any one of you have made something similar, i mean i know there are many talented 3D artists here but making them into a visual and meaningfull wallpaper seemed like an interesting idea to me, Heres my try, Its a first so, Go easy on me
Also the base mesh for the 3D model.

 

[Pleasant]

Those colorful ribbons looks nice
But its not merging well with headphone u need to work more on headphone like adding glow and doing it seemlessly coming from the headphone
Right now it seems like there is a headphone layed behind it there is a layer of ribbon

 

[xYcRaiN]

well i didnt liked the ground reflection as it will consider as a wallpaper try to give fake reflection in AE and about headphone plastic must have speculars and reflections and for ribbons u should add some glow on AE and nice keep up the good work

 

[freakazoid]

The reflection well are quite fake, Its just the same layer flipped Anyway yeah glow would look nice and ill also try to merge the headphones with the colours. Appreciate it.

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Dont know if you people realized but the Different colours are blood splatters on which i added a few color effects,

 

[EmSpecial]

its awesome art .. but agreed to the pleasents point .. head phone is like coming out of screen .. and those colourful ribbons are behind...

 

[r3aper]

As pleasent pointed out...this is very random, no sense of direction or flow or anything.

Check out the basics for making a wallpaper, what to focus, how to focus...putting up things in the middle doesn't make up a wallpaper.

 

[freakazoid]

As pleasent pointed out...this is very random, no sense of direction or flow or anything.

Check out the basics for making a wallpaper, what to focus, how to focus...putting up things in the middle doesn't make up a wallpaper.

Dude that is not what pleasant said, He gave some ideas for improvement, and even if he did say it he said it in a way that wasn't attack me and so straight forward, I'm 14 years old and this is very much my first try, and i didn't just PUT things in the middle i Modeled render and textured the object and if you know even a little about 3d you'd know that, that takes some effort, i also thought this was a good idea for a wallpaper and was totally not random, if its not a good idea then just say it, don't go on and assume i just hooked this up in 5 minutes whilst eating a sandwhich on the other hand..

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Sorry if it sounds rude, but its just that i put alot of effort in this as im new to this stuff, You just straight forwardly admited that my render sucks, which by the way is not constructive critisism...