ok watched the gameplay , its was fine , i mean everything was fine as a gameplay should be but the buzzin sound in the video was it the fan? and background voices were more clear than yours
you also you may cut the parts you think are just useless , it will reduce the video length n size , , background noise wasnt so much messing but your own voice wasnt understandable ,
now the game ,
its really awesome man
blood blood everywhere , it should be marked as "bachon ki puhanch se dorr rakhien" and i heard the sound of a kid around you , you are gonna spoil the innocence of that child