Critique my laptop videos please

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babajee

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Hello friends.

Just recently, I made two laptop related videos for a friend and want to get some thoughts, reviews etc on quality, shortcomings, style and how can they be improved. The theme for both the videos is the same, i.e. Best Gaming Laptop Under $1000 in 2018 (For the US market).

The actual article is on this site (a new one that belongs to a friend of mine) called Laptops Park: Best Gaming Laptop Under $1000 (review)

Using the material on that page, I made these 2 videos. One is very short (about 1 minute) and the other is much longer (~4 minutes).

Here is the shorter one: Video: Best Gaming Laptop Under $1000 for 2018

and here is the longer version: Video: Best Laptop for Gamers in 2018 under $1000

Which one is better, and why? How can I improve the longer version.

Both videos embedded below:

Smaller one

and the Longer one

Note, I am NOT askingfor the quality of the review or the laptop selection (although if you want to comment on that, most welcome).

If anyone is interested how I created these, I will be most happy to tell

Regards
 
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    Why? Was the site hacked or something?
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    The only valid thing from his pov he said in the video is AC dead since Black Flag. According to woke police that game was woke too. Welsh man in West Indies. So atleast he's consistent I guess lol
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    It's based on an actual real life person so I don't think the woke police have a valid case here.
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    Nope. They have a very valid case. The above video explains it all.
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    It's based on an actual real life person so I don't think the woke police have a valid case here.
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    Meanwhile Ghost of Tsushima PC version is out now. Looks 100 times better than ASS Creed already.
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    Did y'all see the new Assassin's Creed trailer? They finally made a AC set in Japan & then they put a negro as the male protagonist. Ubisoft is taking cues from Disney, and it isn't gonna end well for them, just like Disney. Go woke, go broke!
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  • Necrokiller Necrokiller:
    First Fallout 4 update and now this 🤡
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    MS and Bethesda continuing their streak of massive Ls 😬
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    Hello
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  • NaNoW NaNoW:
    by closing down good studios
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    well he is breaking barriers
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    SolitarySoldier said:
    Phil keeps talking about breaking barriers to gaming, making it accessible on all platforms yada yada, while killing competition and creativity at the same time. the fact that i actually believed him for a second lol
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    guys the biggest yapper in the Industry right now. All he do is yap
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  • Necrokiller Necrokiller:
    Phil should be held responsible for this shitfest too, just like Sarah, but it's highly likely that these decisions are coming from Satya. And this isn't even the end of it. More closures are coming.
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  • SolitarySoldier SolitarySoldier:
    if we are moving towards more and more popular trash across platforms that make billions for companies, I'm happy with all the barriers and exclusivity because at least that brings some pressure to create good stuff.
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    Phil keeps talking about breaking barriers to gaming, making it accessible on all platforms yada yada, while killing competition and creativity at the same time. the fact that i actually believed him for a second lol
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    "These changes are not a reflection of the creativity and skill of the talented individuals at these teams or the risks they took to try new things" ... seems to me that's exactly what it is
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    why make good games when u can just buy everyone and shut them down lol
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    I'm gonna say one last time, F*** Microsoft to infinity!
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    Microsoft deserves all the hate they can get. Seriously i can't explain how much i want to curse them out.
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    They could've sold the studios instead of closing them, but the nazi bastards just didn't want competition down the road.
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    https://www.thegamer.com/real-reaso... a studio,owned can become viable competition.
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